2021年12月大学英语四级写作高分范文

　　After the Wenchuan 5.12 earthquake many people wondered why so many people were killed or injured. What is thebest way to prevent tragedy from earthquakes?　　写作范⽂：Preventing Earthquake Damage

　　The devastating 8-magnitude Wenchuan earthquake cost at least 70,000 lives, making it the deadliest earthquake to hitChina since the 1976 Tangshan earthquake. There has been a heated debate concerning how to prevent earthquakedamage. In my opinion, improving building quality and constructing earthquake-resistant buildings should be made a toppriority.

　　To begin with, improving building quality will greatly reduce the number of buildings collapsing in an earthquake,Building vulnerability is closely linked to the casualty rate in a catastrophic earthquake. The central government estimatesthat over 7,000 inadequately engineered schoolrooms collapsed in the earthquake. Chinese netizens have since invented acatchphrase\"tofu-dreg schoolhouses to mock both the quality and the quantity of these inferior constructions that killed somany school children, Substandard building materials were used in some constructions, constituting a great potential dangerto people's lives. Therefore, improving building quality should be put on top of the government's agenda so as to prevent

much of the disastrous effects of earthquakes. Secondly, earthquake-resistant building can effectively withstand earthquakes.In the Wenchuan earthquake, many people were killed due to the low standard of earthquake-resistant buildings. China hasadopted new legislation to enforce proper quake-resistant structures. Hence adopting an advanced quake-proof technique tobuild high-standard quake-resistant buildings is indispensable to tragedy prevention from earthquakes.

　　In conclusion, improving the design and the quality of buildings is the best way to prevent the tragic effects fromearthquakes. (234 words)

2.2021年12⽉⼤学英语四级写作⾼分范⽂　　写作题⽬：交通拥堵

　　The number of private cars in big cities like Beijing and Shanghai is growing daily bringing with it noise, pollution andtraffic jams. Is it necessary to reduce the number of cars in big cities? Suggest ONE way in which this could be done.　　写作范⽂：Increase Public Transportation

　　Beijing is faced with an uphill battle to improve deteriorating air quality and alleviate traffic jams caused by the surge incar use. What is the best way to decrease the number of private automobiles on the road? In my opinion, developingsustainable public transportation strategies should be given top priority.

　　Firstly, a well-managed and punctual public transportation system makes commuting and travelling easier and moreconvenient. One big headache for private car drivers is the annoying traffic jams. However, some forms of public transport,such as subway, magnetically levitated train4 and light rail transit can help commuters and travellers avoid traffic jams,

greatly reducing their time wasted on the road. Furthermore, by taking public transport, people will no longer be bothered bylooking everywhere for a parking place. Therefore, a service-oriented and user-focused public transportation system willdefinitely attract more private car owners, making it possible for the car owners to keep their cars in the garage and choosepublic transport. Secondly, public transport serves as an economic alternative to cars. The Chinese government will providea total of l.3 billion yuan to help Beijing's bus companies reduce fares to only l yuan per ride. The high oil price and automaintenance cost deter car owners from driving their cars. Since public transport is so cheap, there should be no economicreason to drive a car in the city.

　　In conclusion, public transportation should be given a strategic position in the city's sustainable development planningso as to reduce private car use and ultimately relieve the city's traffic jams. (260 words)3.2021年12⽉⼤学英语四级写作⾼分范⽂　　写作题⽬：学费和贫困⽣

　　Some students are unable to enter university because of the high cost of tuition fees. Suggest ONE way to solve thisproblem.

　　写作范⽂：Helping Poor Students Financially

　　Figures from the Ministry of Education indicate that about 2.63 million college students in China suffer from poverty,accounting for 19 percent of the total of 13.5 million students enrolled. Among them, 1.22 million are categorized as

\"extremely poor\" students. Higher education institutes across the country should launch different programmes to providefinancial aid to poor college students.

　　The access to financial aid can prevent poor students from dropping out of colleges and universities. Programmes suchas “Green Passage\" enable poor students to enroll and defer tuition payments. The ministry also encourages poor studentsto apply for state loans. Ministry figures show that the state loan system, introduced in 2000, has aided 2.07 million unrversitystudents. Furthermore, part of the tuition fees collected every year by each university should be used to help poor students,for example, by offering scholarships, tuition waivers and work-study programmes under which students help outs in libraries,teachers' offices or service departments to earn money. Last but not least, implementing a programme for the exemption oftuition and textbook fees for rural poor students and subsidies for poor boarding students can also help ease the financialburden of poor students. Statistics show that l,78 million poor students are still in need of financial help.

　　In conclusion, to prevent students from having to abandon their higher studies through financial difficulties, more policiesconcerning financial aid to poor students need to be mapped out(237 words)